Hi Bloggers
Today I am going to tell you how to make a great blog comment. In order to make this DLO I had to put in a good comment and find the right sentinces for each helpful, thoughul and positive. After I have done these things I'll then say bye.
Here it is⬇
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI have just listened to your DLO and enjoyed listening to your confident voice as you progressed through the different things that you wanted to say as the slides moved from one to another. The slides were colourful and eye catching which is appealing to the audience (in this case myself).
An idea for next time is to keep your pattern of having text in the centre of the slide page but to keep the text size similar so that they remain easy to read as the presentation moves from one point to another. Keep using different text / letter formats but keeping the size consistent would be good I think.
Mr Brown